I. Foster care is necessary
A. to remove children from abuse
B. to remove children from neglect
C. to remove children from unhealthy environments
II. Inconsistency in foster care
A. unstable placement, moving from home to home
B. Abuse in foster care
III. Always improving system
A. improving education
B. getting more from Mary Overington (foster care worker)
IV. Kids getting stuck in foster care
A. Working on a plan that puts a time limit on parents
B. If time limit succeeds then children will leave the system earlier
V. Successful and famous people who came from foster care
A. Oksana Baiul
B. Alexander Hamilton
C. Marilyn Monroe
VI. Those kids that don't get a break like Oksana Baiul and Marilyn Monroe just get thrown out
at 18.
A. CHAFEE
VII. There are many agencies set up to help foster care succeed
A. Mile High United Way
B. Bridging the Gap
C. EVT Program
Monday, March 29, 2010
RJA #9b: Argument
The foster care system is a necessary and successful system.
ARGUEMENTS:
1. Foster care is necessary
-to remove children from abuse, to remove children from neglect, and to remove children from unhealthy environments like drug addicts, prostitution, alcoholics, and gang members
2. Foster care is always improving system
- they are always looking for areas that need improvement, like education
3. there are many successful and famous people from the foster care system
- Oksana Baiul, Alexander Hamiltion, and Marilyn Monroe
4. There are many agencies working for foster cares success
- agencies like the Mile High United Way, Bridging the Gap, CHAFEE, EVT program, and the Lutheran family services
COUNTER-ARGUEMENTS:
1. inconsistances in foster care
- like placement and abuse.
2. kids getting stuck in foster care
- kids are getting stuck in foster care for years making it harder and harder for them to get adopted.
3. not everyone gets a break like Baiul, Hamilton, or Monroe
- there is the CHAFEE program that helps give them life skills, learn how to save, and find affordable housing
ARGUEMENTS:
1. Foster care is necessary
-to remove children from abuse, to remove children from neglect, and to remove children from unhealthy environments like drug addicts, prostitution, alcoholics, and gang members
2. Foster care is always improving system
- they are always looking for areas that need improvement, like education
3. there are many successful and famous people from the foster care system
- Oksana Baiul, Alexander Hamiltion, and Marilyn Monroe
4. There are many agencies working for foster cares success
- agencies like the Mile High United Way, Bridging the Gap, CHAFEE, EVT program, and the Lutheran family services
COUNTER-ARGUEMENTS:
1. inconsistances in foster care
- like placement and abuse.
2. kids getting stuck in foster care
- kids are getting stuck in foster care for years making it harder and harder for them to get adopted.
3. not everyone gets a break like Baiul, Hamilton, or Monroe
- there is the CHAFEE program that helps give them life skills, learn how to save, and find affordable housing
RJA #9a: Thesis Statement
Research Question: Does foster care do what it is meant to do for children?
Presice Claim: Children from foster care have the same chance at being successful as "normal" children
Reasons: it is necessary
it is always improving it's system
there are many successful foster kids
there are many agencies working towards it's success
Complete Thesis: The effectiveness of foster care has been a huge debate over the years; despite the negative outlook foster care has been given, it is a system that is necessary and successful with the help of many people and agencies.
Presice Claim: Children from foster care have the same chance at being successful as "normal" children
Reasons: it is necessary
it is always improving it's system
there are many successful foster kids
there are many agencies working towards it's success
Complete Thesis: The effectiveness of foster care has been a huge debate over the years; despite the negative outlook foster care has been given, it is a system that is necessary and successful with the help of many people and agencies.
Monday, March 15, 2010
RJA #8b: Evaluation Check
http://brittanymartin3.blogspot.com/2010/03/rja-7.html#comment-form
http://carolpilk.blogspot.com/2010/03/rja-7a-evaluation-of-sources_2269.html#comment-form
http://carolpilk.blogspot.com/2010/03/rja-7a-evaluation-of-sources_2269.html#comment-form
RJA #8a: Quotation, Paraphrase, and Summary
There are issues and problems within our community that are bigger than we are and impossible to solve on our own. No single organization or individual can tackle these issues without help. That’s where Mile High United Way comes in.
Combining the collective strength of more than 40,000 donors, 800 local businesses, 100 non-profit partners and local and state government, Mile High United Way is leading the movement for positive change [in children’s lives]. Together we deliver lasting solutions for individuals and families in the metropolitan area. Together we can do what none of us can do alone.
http://www.unitedwaydenver.org/site/c.rwL8KjNULrH/b.4119475/k.8664/Community_Outreach_in_Metro_Denver_Colorado__Mile_High_United_Way.htm
Quotation:
There are a lot of organizations are America to help foster children. We have a handful of them right here in Colorado. One of the major one’s recommended by social workers is the Mile High United Way. “Mile High United Way is leading the movement for positive change [in children’s lives]. Together we deliver lasting solutions…in the metropolitan area.”
Paraphrase:
Our communities have troubles that are too great for a single person to handle on their own. You can’t find just one place that can solve these all by themselves. The Mile High United way works with thousands of donors and hundreds of close by businesses and non-profit organizations to help make an impact in the community. In unison with all these groups, they better the lives of the citizens around the Denver area. Working together, we help make things happen that cannot be done by your self.
Summary:
This paragraph talks about how the Mile High United Way works to help those who cannot overcome their obstacles on their own. Through working with many donors, businesses, and non-profit organizations they can make a huge, lasting difference around the Denver and surrounding areas.
Combining the collective strength of more than 40,000 donors, 800 local businesses, 100 non-profit partners and local and state government, Mile High United Way is leading the movement for positive change [in children’s lives]. Together we deliver lasting solutions for individuals and families in the metropolitan area. Together we can do what none of us can do alone.
http://www.unitedwaydenver.org/site/c.rwL8KjNULrH/b.4119475/k.8664/Community_Outreach_in_Metro_Denver_Colorado__Mile_High_United_Way.htm
Quotation:
There are a lot of organizations are America to help foster children. We have a handful of them right here in Colorado. One of the major one’s recommended by social workers is the Mile High United Way. “Mile High United Way is leading the movement for positive change [in children’s lives]. Together we deliver lasting solutions…in the metropolitan area.”
Paraphrase:
Our communities have troubles that are too great for a single person to handle on their own. You can’t find just one place that can solve these all by themselves. The Mile High United way works with thousands of donors and hundreds of close by businesses and non-profit organizations to help make an impact in the community. In unison with all these groups, they better the lives of the citizens around the Denver area. Working together, we help make things happen that cannot be done by your self.
Summary:
This paragraph talks about how the Mile High United Way works to help those who cannot overcome their obstacles on their own. Through working with many donors, businesses, and non-profit organizations they can make a huge, lasting difference around the Denver and surrounding areas.
Monday, March 8, 2010
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